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I. Internal - bridge - Pilot at controls and person in uniform on screen
Handler discussion
Discussion with main AI about how much the handler is a dink
Flashback to trainer explaining how to 'deal' with handlers
Second AI defends handler, saying they must have a tough job
Third AI flirts with pilot and calls the handler cute
II. Internal - personal quarters - Pilot lying on bunk
Talking to main AI about ship status and this weeks agenda
Goes to sleep and dreams about being married to Third AI
III. Internal - bridge - Pilot talking with Handler
Normal handler discussion
They figure out both are pilots and are not sure what to do
They try to figure out if there was a mix up, so they try to contact another pilot
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So, does it just sound too clunky or have people just not decided to give it a try yet?
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